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Novichok   
8 Jul 2022
News / Lukashenko - removes graveyard - AK resistance fighters [51]

Especially that there are Poles still living in Belarus

If they were born in Belarus, they are Belarussians. If they are still "Poles" their Polish asses should have been taken to the curb a long time ago.
Novichok   
7 Jul 2022
UK, Ireland / Boris Johnson - is the new British PM a popular figure in Poland? [150]

Johnson is paying with his post for all economic disturbances...

...but not for the irreversible damage by the refugees? The economy can be fixed. A foreign army can be killed or expelled. Refugees are forever and make the country unrecognizable. They cost a lot of money and turn once-peaceful places into raping and killing fields.

Somehow those things never make it to the PF leftists' lists.
Novichok   
7 Jul 2022
Off-Topic / Is it worth to stay? [59]

Like addiction. :):)

to always look at road kill, no matter how repulsive. Or running to the house on fire...
Novichok   
7 Jul 2022
Off-Topic / The "Anglicization" of Europe [132]

...but Islamization of the UK continues unabated...These idiots actually help the scum off their rickety boats...with open arms. Literally.
Novichok   
6 Jul 2022
News / Up to 80 Polish fighters killed in Ukraine [63]

Poland cannot tolerate Russia taking Ukraine

It's happening and if the US, the EU, and NATO can't stop it, neither can Poland.

he advocates for Poland to be controlled by Kremlin

I never did any such thing. You are lying.

He sees the Kremlin gang as a better option than the Washington elite/swamp,

I never did that, either. You are lying again.
Novichok   
6 Jul 2022
News / Up to 80 Polish fighters killed in Ukraine [63]

Yes, just cheap Russian propaganda....

...that foreign killers die in large numbers? It's true. Good.

Over the past 10 days 170 foreign mercenaries have been killed in Ukraine, Russian Defense Minister Sergey Shoigu said
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

Darling, where did you get your education?

The same place where you did or better. Liceum 37 in Warsaw (Nowy Swiat and Swietokrzyska)
Hey, professor, why don't you grade his first sentence. You know the scale...2 - 5. Here it is:

As there are troubling times in Europe nowadays, skies darkening in midst of summer over a beautiful country filled with the main river named Vistula in English (it is derived from the Latin version of the locals name for it "Wisła") as you will soon learn Latin had a large impact on the Polish language and way of life, but for now bear with me cause there is another bear enireraly roaming close to this country's borders.

If it's less than 5 (bardzo dobry), correct it to deserve 5...hahahahahaha...Go ahead...It shouldn't take you long...hahahahaha...

Stop hijacking threads with your rubbish please
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

Where did you see moaning?

OK, lamenting...Here:

Unfortunately.

Boohoo...
Are you going to help him or not?

You wouldn`t be able to write such texts,

If that was my ability to write in English I would kill myself.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

Which left permanent scars in Russ people`s psyche. Unfortunately.

Are you going to moan or help him write in better English?

Romantic rendition

History is not about romances so chill out, little girl.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

And that's why professional authors have editors ..........

And how is he going to get that service or ANY feedback? So far you and other weasels here gave him nothing. Google translator will be a crutch but at least he can take the first steps under some supervision. If not google, you?

You'll develop your English language skills

...in twenty years.

develop your own writing style po Angielsku.

Before you develop your own English, you have to first know English. Duh!
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / The Two Saddest Nations on Earth... Poles and Jews [243]

Coz there are still events which show that Poles are antisemitic.

poles are not antisemitic. jews are antisemitic by acting jewish instead of polish. The rest is just a natural reaction to it and would happen to any group acting that way.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

.is this written for Poles or foreigners?

Obviously for foreigners. Poles already know their history.

Why am I the only one here trying to help the guy? With all these teachers crawling under every PF rock, plus Z, he should be inundated with offers of help. Instead, all he gets are these stupid polite smiles.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Why American military aid to Europe and Poland is important to America itself? [227]

China or RuSSia which want to abolish democracy and introduce dictatorships in the whole world.

...as opposed to the US bergs running Facebooks - those oh-so-democratic outfits promoting diversity of opinions and open debates.

Try to say that a man cannot ever be a woman here and see how quickly you will be talking to some woke moron at the HR department explaining to you how to buy health insurance to cover you while you will be looking for a new job.

It is true that Polaks are exceptionally dumb. Like children. America - good. Russia - bad. Really baaaad.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

Kashub, try this...Whatever you wrote so far, cut it up into simple, one noun and one verb sentences - with dates if applicable. Like: In xxxx, y did z. Then add adverbs and adjectives but only if absolutely necessary and never the subjective kind to show how you feel.

Next, combine sentences to make things less mechanical. Write in Polish and google translate into English. This will show you if what you wrote is understandable and will eliminate English spelling and punctuation errors. If you prefer to write in English, install Grammarly.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / What makes you feel Polish? [167]

Even Polish Pope was Jewish to them.

Is he in pain?

there are many antisemites in Poland,

What happened to the poliSSh Soviet collaborators? I heard that all were Jews.
Novichok   
5 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

After the battle of Grunwald and several conflicts later with the Teutonic Order, Poland established itself as the major power in the eastern part of Central Europe and the western part of Eastern Europe. It's influence was strong among the Baltic peoples and the relationship between the elites of Poland and Lithuania grew steadily closer, at that moment both nations saw co-operation and communication as a way of gaining victory over major foes.

It began a golden age for Poland, trade flourished (most knowingly grain being sold to Western Europe) and it's military might increased. In the west the threat was reduced as German states had more then enough problems on their own and preferred peacefulborder with Poland at the time and Emperor of the HRE (Holy Roman Empire) seemed vaguely and distantly interested.

However pagans being pacified and converted a new threat began to show itself on the horizon. The Ottomons! The band of people united under a family tracing it's lineage to their ruler named Osman was most noteably supported by Turks, which were filled with religious Zeal and aimed to subjegate all lands on their path due to their proclaiming of following a prophet called Muhammad. Poles knowing that there will those pretending to be Jesus or a "next prophet" after him knew fairly well that they had beenlead astray and tried to lead as many as possible away from God.

It had to be stopped, just as Slavs used to be under pagan rule in Eastern Europe, now those not flying the Polish banner of the crowned white eagle on a red background. (You might ask: but isn't Polands flag just white and red? Nowadays that is true, however back then it was the royal coat of arms of the Piast dynasty. The first rulers of Poland).

As Novogrodians, Muscovites, Pskovians and other Ruthinians based around certain cities had their own problems and fight with the mongol horde who turned to Islam.

There were southern Slavs under threat of this new rule of Osmans lineage who tried to build up again the Roman Empire, which Christianity triumphantly destroyed and made to cease it's existence on the pile of history. Yet megalomaniacs were marching on after capture of Constantinople, there was a joint effort in liberating the areas with a crusade, jointly with the Hungarians. Yet due to a lost battle at Varna, the initiative turned from offence to defence for a long time.

This lasting threat from the Ottomans would later on make the priorities of an emerging Prussian state, Imperialistic Austria and Tsardom of Russia seem ignored and eventually disasterous.

One of the main reasons of those three powerhouses to cut up Poland like a cake was it's political system, which was introduced due to the fashion of the renessance and last male heir eventually dying out. For that reason elections were introduced! But that's for another time!

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Highlighted are just the spelling errors and some punctuation. Style is beyond repair.

BTW, try to include the timeline coz readers might feel lost.

How about helping him make this mess digestible...Too much effort, professor?
Novichok   
4 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

Would you be so kind to suggest an improvement?

I am happy to help.
1. Uncombine dissimilar points. Setting up the mood does not combine well with a lesson about the Latin roots of the river's name and a veiled reference to Russia - all in the first sentence.

2. Sentences should be short enough for an average reader to read them, get them, and repeat them - if not verbatim then at least the main point.

3. Since English is not your primary language, write in Polish and google translate. Then give it a final shine if you are not comfortable with the product.

4. Use shorter paragraphs.

5. Use short sentences to start paragraphs to get the reader interested in the rest of it. Anything longer than 10 or so words needs a very good reason to exist as humans like short and declarative sentences because those are used in the most profound of situations. Even the famous 'day of infamy" opening sentence was too long.

6. Go easy on describing feelings. Leave that to the context.

Final point: never listen to "oh how lovely" fake friends. They are lazy and trying to be nice, no matter what. It's a well-known mental disorder aka participation trophism. OK, I just made it up...
Novichok   
4 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

I guess it's because English isn't his native language

That five-pound sentence has nothing to do with English. It would be unacceptable in any language.

I am a great swimmer, I am able to hold my breath for a long time.

Another Polish metaphor, BB. This mental disorder has no cure and your country is in part responsible for it.
Novichok   
4 Jul 2022
History / Introduction to Polish history! From a Polish perspective [94]

A good read! :)

Have you lost your mind or do you just hate him? My post #2 is just his first sentence!
I know that you Germans like long words, but that sentence alone would give any editor a heart attack.
This is what happens when poets write prose. No rules. Just feelings...