Love / What are the best love poems in Polish to receive? [77]

Hi am new to the forum and love reading and learning so much.

I have tried to write a poem from English to Polish can any Polish speakers see that it reads properly? In terms of how I want to portray it from english?

Have to say I love the fact that the nature of Polish culture so warmly embraces romance and the idea of romanticism in its culture from art, words, stories, music, people, food what a beautiful culture!

Thanks! :)

A glimpse of emotion
Captured in a deliciously mirrored reflection
Unveils a warmth uniting two souls in a sea of adventures
Blossoming a love deeper than where
All senses are lost to the power of control
A timeless clock breathes with our youthful souls
To conquer endlessly fearless dreams
Exploring passion... A taste untraveled before

Emocje uchwycone spojrzenie w odbiciu
lustrzanym odbiciem doskonale prezentuje
się zjednoczenie dwóch dusz w cieple morze
przygody Kwitnienie głębiej, niż z miłości
gdzie wszystkie zmysły są utracone na zegar
sterujący ponadczasowy oddycha z
młodzieńczych dusz na podbój naszych
nieustraszonych marzenia bez końca
odkrywania pasji ...
A smak untraveled przed