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Sending this poem to a girl - cheezy or not?


porta 18 | 297  
17 Jul 2007 /  #1
I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet?

One says it takes one minute to meet a special human,
one hour to appreciate it,
one day to love it,
but a lifetime to forget it.
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #2
I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet?

With a box o' chocolatey goodies and maybe two dozen roses.......sweet for sure :]
Shawn_H  
17 Jul 2007 /  #3
human

it

Doesn't ring as personal to me.. depends on the desired effect, and the context..

Better ask a girl/woman/lady though - I'm just a stoopid, stoopid man :-) the rest seems ok though
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #4
I'm just a stoopid, stoopid man :-)

You're a dude????? <<<<gasp>>>> (imagine one of the good old "spy" smilies here)
Shawn_H  
17 Jul 2007 /  #5
Sorry to wreck your fantasies Art...
OP porta 18 | 297  
17 Jul 2007 /  #7
My intention is not to sound to serious yet ,but also hint to her that i think she is someone special :)
Therefore i have human and it. I could change it with Lady and her.
shewolf 5 | 1,077  
17 Jul 2007 /  #8
It's not that the poem is "cheezy". It might be a little overwhelming for someone who isn't in a commited relationship with you. She might think you're pressuring her to feel something too serious. She might even see you as a potential stalker who won't be able to forget her if she doesn't want to see you anymore. That's just my opinion.

My suggestion is to give her something less serious if you're trying to make her like you.
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #9
My intention is not to sound to serious yet ,but also hint to her that i think she is someone special

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....................why didn't you just say so.

Yeah I can't help you with that, sorry :]

My suggestion is to give her something less serious if you're trying to make her like you.

Yeah.....like an old gym sock or maybe some fresh road-kill. :]
shopgirl 6 | 928  
17 Jul 2007 /  #10
There was another thing in here in the translation forum...."short verse for a card" I think that is very nice...let me see if I can find it for you.....its not a poem but I like it!

polishforums.com/short_verse_card_belive_someone-10_8299_0.html
shewolf 5 | 1,077  
17 Jul 2007 /  #11
Yeah.....like an old gym sock or maybe some fresh road-kill. :]

Is that why the women can't get enough of you, Artur?
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #12
Well here's a poem that isn't serious but can give her a hint of your intentions.

Roses are red,
lemons are sour,
spread your legs,
and give me an hour.

:]
shopgirl 6 | 928  
17 Jul 2007 /  #13
maybe some fresh road-kill. :]

Kitties do bring their owners dead birds and mice to show love.....happens all the time! :)

Nice kitty! :)
Shawn_H  
17 Jul 2007 /  #14
Roses are red,
lemons are sour

bustingagut!!!
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #15
Is that why the women can't get enough of you, Artur?

Who doesn't want a cat with a melon for a hat???

( Not only can I write poems, but I can rhyme:] )
shopgirl 6 | 928  
17 Jul 2007 /  #16
Well here's a poem that isn't serious but can give her a hint of your intentions.

Porta....wait until you know her better before following Artur's romantic tips! :D
shewolf 5 | 1,077  
17 Jul 2007 /  #17
Kitties do bring their owners dead birds and mice to show love.....happens all the time! :)

Is that why my cat did that? Wow.
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #18
No. He was showing you what he wishes he was big enough to do to you :]
shewolf 5 | 1,077  
17 Jul 2007 /  #19
I thought he was just trying to prove how tough he was.
ArturSzastak 3 | 593  
17 Jul 2007 /  #20
Yeah I dunno......my dog is a friggin mole serial killer though :]
OP porta 18 | 297  
17 Jul 2007 /  #21
There was another thing in here in the translation forum...."short verse for a card" I think that is very nice...let me see if I can find it for you.....its not a poem but I like it!

URL

Thanks for the link shopgirl. ;) I will try it out and see what she thinks :)
I will hide my poem for some other time.
PunchBuggyBlue  
17 Jul 2007 /  #22
I know you're not my hunnny,
So I thought about it twice,
But it's just dinner and movie,
Do you think that would be nice?

Try that, a little more appropriate for someone you just met. Make sure the card is nice though.
Lady in red  
18 Jul 2007 /  #23
I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet?One says it takes one minute to meet a special human,one hour to appreciate it,one day to love it,but a lifetime to forget it.

I wouldn't :( not until you know her really well.......just ask her out for a coffee.....:)
Jambo 2 | 106  
18 Jul 2007 /  #24
If you have not gone out with her at all or only for a short time I think it is way over the top and she will run a mile. Lady in red's advice seems most sensible.
Wyspianska  
18 Jul 2007 /  #25
Sry, i dont wanna be cruel but that poem is ... ughh. Dont send her it even after longer time of relationship! Never!
It will kill everything, trust me ^^
U should take it easy. Tell her better some SMALL compliment or so ;)
Step by step.

spread your legs,
and give me an hour.

LOL
shocked
zhenzhen 4 | 27  
18 Jul 2007 /  #26
I think girls like poem,but sweet and good poem.
Wyspianska  
18 Jul 2007 /  #27
And i think that PEOPLE like poems, but good poems ;) sweet eee? no:D
Lady in red  
18 Jul 2007 /  #28
It's definitely cheesy and only send it to someone you never want to see again.

Poems are when you are infatuated or in love. Never b4 or after <grin>
Wyspianska  
18 Jul 2007 /  #29
It's definitely cheesy and only send it to someone you never want to see again.

Bingo ;)
I think exactly the same, just didnt want say it so directly ^^
Lady in red  
18 Jul 2007 /  #30
That's ok :) How are you today ?

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