Sending this poem to a girl - cheezy or not?

Ahh thank u, im fine:) Hope u too
;)

That's good Wyspy :)

I'm ok just got an ear infection that's stopping me from doing what I want too.......but I',m fine .........and we have no rain at the moment so that's even better :)

How long do you think you will be in Hospital ?

Well ,we have done the coffee ,dinner ,dance ,movie ,kiss and the bed. ;)

No need to send a poem then!

Ugh, ear infection, that sucks! no loud music :)

If everything will be ok with tests then im out tomorrow :)
If not i would need operation and stay here even couple weeks.
But im sure i will be home tomorrow;p Just feel it. U know, women have got intuicion, yup?

Hope you feel better soon.

Ohhhhh
Jambo!
So u think that poem is just good for make girl more interested in u and take her to ur bed? ^^ Haha, good one


Thx but i really feel excellent. I shouldnt talk about it, now everyone ask me for my health haha. Its nice, but im really ok! :D

Yeah :) we do don't we......

do you want me to correct your english ? Was just wondering if that would be a way of helping with your english ? I know you taught yourself and I think that's great.

Fingers crossed for tomorrow then.

I like my music but no ipod :(

let me say it this way:
Y E S ! ! :)

we thought you hadn't taken her out yet :(

Ok, well, if you're over 60 years old then yeah, send the poem otherwise get a better one.....seriously.

Haha, u think that age is connected with sending or not sending poems? Thats funny ;-)

[quote=Wyspianska] So u think that poem is just good for make girl more interested in u and take her to ur bed? ^^ Haha, good one

No I do not think that! I think I would be stupid if I thought that. It seemed to me that the relationship established does not require a poem or at least that sort of poem. Much better to talk to her and tell her his feelings. However I do know my Polish female friend does not like discussing her feelings for me nor me discussing my feelings for her.

Ok, your english just needs small tweaking about. Some words you write phonetically
(that means you write them like they sound) so people can still understand you.

An example......


it is spelt intuition, you just used a 'c' instead of a 't'


If not, I will need an operation and stay here for a couple of weeks.

Or,

If not, I would need an operation and have to stay here for a couple of weeks.

Lady, thx for help :) Ill try to remember my mistakes

One says it takes one minute to meet a special human,
one hour to appreciate it,
one day to love it,
but a lifetime to forget it.

Look at the words on it......."A lifetime to forget" sounds like someone much older would say that sort of thing.......that's what I meant, who thinks about lifetimes.......just my view.

Anyway, wyspy, they're not mistakes, you're just learning......I think your english is great but I noticed b4 you wanted to improve even more on it :)

Ah, u right. I red that poem only once and didnt remember words, cuz its sucks:P


Since today, ure my own teacher;p U can correct me when u want :)

Thanks :)

When I need to brush up on my polish I'll give you a shout too :)

Deal ;)

I think it can be quite sweet, but that's only if you were sending it to me and if I really liked you the same way too.

I would be a bit unsure how to react to it however if I don't really like you the same way at all. I don't think it hints at commitment in the serious sense in any way. Its more like the sort of "I'm so crazy about you" dramatic sense... a bit childish a bit like a young lover's words, a bit old-fashioned if you like.

Think it depends on the person you are giving it to, really. Like some other ladies on the forum have commented that they think its cheesy... So... I think you have to use your own judgment !

Good luck!

PS oh yes if you are really gonna use the poem, I think you might want to change the word "human" to "person". People don't tend to say "special human" when they are referring to a special person...

Try this........

My heart to you is given:
Oh, do give yours to me;
We'll lock them up together,
And throw away the key.

The thing about poetry is unless you're REALLY good at it, it's always cheesy except to the object of your affection. So I'd say, do you want to be posting that stuff on a public forum?

(for people who have already slept together)

A poem is a poem.
If she likes you she will like the poem - no matter how bad - because you sent it.
If she's not interested she will not like the poem.

No sorry - the last bit is wrong.
If she's not interested - and the poem is good - she may become interested.

But the poem has to rock!! big time

Actually - lets face it - were talking about women here - so who the hell knows...

Oh, I think it is sweet.

I think you should send it. :-)