Sending this poem to a girl - cheezy or not?

I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet?

One says it takes one minute to meet a special human,
one hour to appreciate it,
one day to love it,
but a lifetime to forget it.

With a box o' chocolatey goodies and maybe two dozen roses.......sweet for sure :]

Doesn't ring as personal to me.. depends on the desired effect, and the context..

Better ask a girl/woman/lady though - I'm just a stoopid, stoopid man :-) the rest seems ok though

You're a dude????? <<<<gasp>>>> (imagine one of the good old "spy" smilies here)

Sorry to wreck your fantasies Art...

It's OK, I'll live :]

My intention is not to sound to serious yet ,but also hint to her that i think she is someone special :)
Therefore i have human and it. I could change it with Lady and her.

It's not that the poem is "cheezy". It might be a little overwhelming for someone who isn't in a commited relationship with you. She might think you're pressuring her to feel something too serious. She might even see you as a potential stalker who won't be able to forget her if she doesn't want to see you anymore. That's just my opinion.

My suggestion is to give her something less serious if you're trying to make her like you.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....................why didn't you just say so.

Yeah I can't help you with that, sorry :]


Yeah.....like an old gym sock or maybe some fresh road-kill. :]

There was another thing in here in the translation forum...."short verse for a card" I think that is very nice...let me see if I can find it for you.....its not a poem but I like it!

polishforums.com/short_verse_card_belive_someone-10_8299_0.html

Is that why the women can't get enough of you, Artur?

Well here's a poem that isn't serious but can give her a hint of your intentions.

Roses are red,
lemons are sour,
spread your legs,
and give me an hour.

:]

Kitties do bring their owners dead birds and mice to show love.....happens all the time! :)

Nice kitty! :)

Who doesn't want a cat with a melon for a hat???

( Not only can I write poems, but I can rhyme:] )

Porta....wait until you know her better before following Artur's romantic tips! :D

Is that why my cat did that? Wow.

No. He was showing you what he wishes he was big enough to do to you :]

I thought he was just trying to prove how tough he was.

Yeah I dunno......my dog is a friggin mole serial killer though :]

Thanks for the link shopgirl. ;) I will try it out and see what she thinks :)
I will hide my poem for some other time.

I know you're not my hunnny,
So I thought about it twice,
But it's just dinner and movie,
Do you think that would be nice?

Try that, a little more appropriate for someone you just met. Make sure the card is nice though.

I wouldn't :( not until you know her really well.......just ask her out for a coffee.....:)

If you have not gone out with her at all or only for a short time I think it is way over the top and she will run a mile. Lady in red's advice seems most sensible.

Sry, i dont wanna be cruel but that poem is ... ughh. Dont send her it even after longer time of relationship! Never!
It will kill everything, trust me ^^
U should take it easy. Tell her better some SMALL compliment or so ;)
Step by step.


LOL
shocked

I think girls like poem,but sweet and good poem.

And i think that PEOPLE like poems, but good poems ;) sweet eee? no:D

It's definitely cheesy and only send it to someone you never want to see again.

Poems are when you are infatuated or in love. Never b4 or after <grin>

Bingo ;)
I think exactly the same, just didnt want say it so directly ^^

That's ok :) How are you today ?