Do u girls really like to get poems from men or it's rather overrated?

Well Kamyk, you wrote some words, which you shouldnt use in a poem... but I'm not a critic so meybe I shouldnt have commented.

Everyman’s nightmare. Being laugh at after putting down ones guard. :)


For a first date? :)

chocolate doesn't hurt either - I like dark:)belgium one....mmmm

My Polish language teacher from highschool hated my essays ... I guess there must have been a reason for it :)

I'm so touched. I don't know how to read Polish. Can you translate? I was able to translate the other poem, the one that someone else wrote, in an online dictionary but some of the words to this one won't translate.

A poem from a men is a very cherished and appreciated deed in my book. It is the romanticism of the moment when he reads it and the words he chose just for me....

What can be more wonderful? Forget the chocolates. :)

Im not forgetting the importance, I was meaning instead of the
choc, flowers, poems.

ive never been very hard to please, flowers should stay in the earth and show
their beauty, candy although it is good, and addictive, I dont eat to many.
and poems are sweet, from the heart, yes that I could accept, but I want the
massage cant fault that one :)

lol ok to be not so difficult, a nice dinner for two, then go to the massage.. lol

here is my attempt to translate this, I'm afraid it lost some meaning but here you go shewolf :)

"We felt this warmth when we were hugging each other,
We did not know what anger is,
For so long we would look into each others' eyes,
I love you - I was saying to you then
It's been so much different since then ...
I miss you, I cannot easily forget!
My mind is drifting almost like among rough ocean's waves on the remains of my tiny raft!
And then I begin to believe that my hope will drown forever,
But I still fight, I dont give up, I catch a paddle in my hand ..."

That's beautiful. The verdict is that your poem is so much better than the other one that someone else wrote. Your poem expresses such truth, things that can be deeply understood. The reason I like reading poems from men is that they give a glimpse of the person within. They often reveal meaningful things that casual conversation or thoughtful actions can't. :)

Not me... I tell her whats on my other mind and get to business... I find the direct approach works well... Then I eat the chocolates on the way home :)

Ok, I do not like the first one... The second one is better in my opinion, however I am not a critic either.

I remember in high school we were asked to write fraszka and one other type of poem. So there were like a couple hundrets of students writing couse it was obligatory. And both of my poems were among best according to teachers verdict :). However I lost them both already, because I was too ashamed of my work.

yes... fir a first date. are you suprised?
When I get an invitation for a date, from polish guys it's always beer... ok sometimes coffee..

That's mostly how I do things. It's a good way to get to know someone . Just sit and have a few drinks or a coffee. I'd exclude going to the cinema or sth that will take your attention away from that person.

It's a little known fact that today, as any Friday, is POETS Day (P**s off early tomorrow's Saturday). Have a great weekend everybody.

But do you mean situation like: you just meet a guy and he spontaneously offers to take you for a drink or a cup of coffee at the spur of the moment, or you meet a guy and he invites you for a drink or a cup of coffee the next day?

I meant next day....

Blimey, that's not good, that's not good at all. So how old were they?

dating investigator, aren't you?:)

from 20 till 30. Matyjasz, so where do you invite your dates?

I'm in a serious relationship for some time now, but if I were to take a woman for a first date I would choose to go to theatre, art gallery or restaurant. In a winter a skating rink is a interesting option. I would leave cinema for another time, when we would know each other more. Currently I'm thinking of taking my better part to opera, as she really fancies it. I'm not actually a major fan of it, but I’m ready to sacrifice myself for the sake of love. :) Generally I would always include a nice place where we could eat something, as I can't concentrate on spreading my charm on empty stomach. :)

Great option :)

apparently, I have no luck with guys....

i think a man who invites you for a couple of beers is protecting himself. Well if the date will be bad he will not even remember, and next day when he wake up the belief that he is the macho will still be with him :) :) :) :)

For me a cup of coffee would be fine - its cold here so... its always a little bit of warm .... :) (Did I say that.... I feel myself pity now :( )

:)

Well Miss K, next time a guy asks you on a date ensure that dinner is included!

But, these aren't dates to go party...most of the time :) As a semi- responsible adult I think that going for a coctail or 2 wouldn't be considered protecting myself.

Fisz you are completely right pal.
when I read the post of KAKA I just created in my mind a picture of a man who desperately drinks one beer after another ...(I will not even mention about the increasing beauty of the date woman :) :)) :)

I couldnt stop myself to say that.
Well dear semi- resposible Mr. Fisz.... do you see the difference between a couple of beer and party... because its not the same for me ... even literally :)

thanks for a positive review :) Good to know there is a small probability that my chicken-scratch peoms would find some demand in the market out there :P


Opera really IS a major sacrifice for a guy. The last time I was in opera was in Bratislava (Slowakia), tickets were like 15 polish zl for 1st class seat and it was a New Year's Eve Performance - now that's a good exchange rate!

I've done this in my younger years, but it was a blind date. That was the only situation that it was called for(the beauty thing ..LOL). Other than that I really like to enjoy a glass or 2 of wine/beer. There's definitely a difference. Going to party you have that in mind and you'll focus on that ..well...until...Gleba :)

I have the opposite problem, I can't write anything good in Polish. But if anyone is interested in english........

Here are some things I wrote

geocities.com/fromthemindofamadman/

I like them, thanks for sharing your work