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My Ode to Poland


ftggoP  2 | 27  
21 Oct 2009 /  #1
A little poem I wrote that stresses Poland's importance in my life

The Salute

Every day
I pass The Flag,
And look at it with glee,
I raise my arm,
"Salute" I yell-
How greatly I love thee

Comments? Reflections? Did I show how much I love Poland, or should I try harder?

Always saluting,
ftggoP
krysia  23 | 3058  
21 Oct 2009 /  #2
Did I show how much I love Poland

Very.
ShawnH  8 | 1488  
21 Oct 2009 /  #3
I can sense the flow.

Whatever that may be.
OP ftggoP  2 | 27  
22 Oct 2009 /  #4
ahh you have used the word flow correctly! +10 citizen points for you!

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