Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 1 Oct 2008 / #1When I see you, O Poland...I see you stand strong...I see you firm..A sign of righteous against all wrong....When I feel you, O Poland...I feel your tender touch...I feel the protection...I feel the love so much...When I hear you, O Poland...I hear the winds speak...I hear the breeze whishper...I hear the flowing river's songs...I hear them say O Poland... YOU ARE THE RIGHTEOUS OVER ALL WRONGS!The Land of its people...the land of peace...The Land of Spring, Summer & Winters mild or peak...The Land of hope, and the land of love...The Land of trees, forests, fields and the settling dove...When your leaves touch my forehead...I feel my mother's care...When your tree gives me shelter...I feel being in my father's sphere...I tell you, O Poland...You will remain eternal...A land of the kind, a land which washes away despair...You are the land of the farmer...a hand which feeds..You are mine O Poland... you are for them who have love in their speak!By: Lodz_The_Boat :)
Polson 5 | 1,768 1 Oct 2008 / #2Terre de liberté,Terre qui a saigné,Terre qui s'est battue,Terre qui a vaincu.Au milieu de tant d'ennemis,Ton peuple a souffert,Mais de braves hommes ont péri,Pour te rendre fière.Ton drapeau porte la couleur du sang,Symbole d'un pays en guerre,Mais aussi le blanc,Telle la neige des rudes hivers.Si aujourd'hui ton peuple vit libre et fier,La mémoire des ancêtres reste entière,Ô Pologne, pays de mes frères.Ô Pologne, pays de ma chair.Polson.A little shorter than yours, LTB, it took me 10 minutes to write it ;)
Matyjasz 2 | 1,544 1 Oct 2008 / #3It's too pompus for my taste, but respect for writing in your secong language.
OP Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 1 Oct 2008 / #4where are the creative minds...where are the patriotic and poetic hearts~!!!
Wroclaw 44 | 5,369 1 Oct 2008 / #5A Dubious Poem.The lakes in summerPeople sailingThe lakes in winterFrozen overThe cities and townsGrowing fastThe cities and townsBeautiful squaresThe mountains to the eastTall and mightyThe mountains to the westGentle and calmThe Baltic SeaFor funThe Baltic SeaFor amberThe history of PolandStrength and hopeThe history of PolandRelates my pastFarms and villagesToo few cowsFarms and villagesIn need of help
Hueg - | 320 1 Oct 2008 / #6Tracing the path of aNew dawnHopeful eyes watch shieldedby dirt covered fingersChange tempts that fickle breezeChills to the boneFair winds.
szarlotka 8 | 2,206 1 Oct 2008 / #7A Dubious Poem.From the Master Dubious Poet... a most welcome return
OP Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 3 Oct 2008 / #8The Might of AgesThe right of SagesThe Pride of the Devine Hand....Its My Poland... its my Poland... its my Blessed Land...its my Poland!...The Sword of PowerThe Power of TruthThe Eyes of KindnessThe Language of the Youth!The Words of Change...The tide of LoveThe Nation of Nations...Blessed from up above....Its the land of beauty...the land of hope...Its my blessed land...blessed are every sand....Its my Poland... its my Poland...its my Poland.......its, my ~Poland~....By: Lodz_The_Boat (I have developed such a strong tune to it... if only i could add that)A nation of torchesA nation of riversA vision of wisdomA flow of love's believers...A nation of today...A nation of the farmer...A nation that welcomes...A nation whose greets are warmer...A nation which is yourse...If you are for its love...A nation, O my Poland, exalted by up above!By: Lodz_The_Boat (I hope you like it...didnt develop a tune yet).Could the administrator write a poem. So wonderful it could be :) ...Less poets in here... :P ...Anyone else with a patriotic poet inside?
Hueg - | 320 3 Oct 2008 / #9administratorA jauntey little number :)Admin is my nameAnd PF is my nationThe US is my dwelling placeThe stars are my destination:)
miranda 3 Oct 2008 / #10Admin is my nameand PF is my GAME,The US is my dwelling placeThe stars are my destination
Hueg - | 320 3 Oct 2008 / #11Not bad M but using game instead of nation means that the second line loses its Foyle like Gulliver without his mini golf. :)
OP Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 4 Oct 2008 / #12Admin... you will not add anything? :(What about more poets... I will add here soon again :)
Hueg - | 320 5 Oct 2008 / #13didnt develop a tune yetAll words have their own tune mate you just have to let the music sing to you. Don't believe it?Try saying the first lines of your poem like a Dalek. :)A nation of torchesA nation of riversNow say it again but in your own voice. See how when you say it normally it finds its own melody?And if I may take your words and develop them. Indulge my presumptiveness mate it's just an exercise. :)Beacons burning brightlyShimmer on cascading beautySparkle on wise eyesThose that love Poland.edit: forgot my smilies
OP Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 6 Oct 2008 / #14Under the wide sky, a bed of rosesThats you, O PolandOver the bed of roses, a patch of cloudsThats you, O Poland...Your face is ... my hearts desire,Your truth takes ... my dreams go higher ...Your tender smile, which I see scattered throughout...Through trees, through branches, through leaves and in the sprout...Lights dance through them, creating the rhythm every way...O Poland... That how you begin a wonderful day..O Poland... thats how.... you begin.... all..........your day.By: Lodz_The_Boat
Jova - | 172 6 Oct 2008 / #15"Englishmen, you're all so fuc*ing pompous, and none of you have got any balls. "I know the majority of you are not English here but this quote sprang up in my mind the minute I read your poems :) hahahaI'm not trying to accuse you of having no balls though... But you are extremely pompous indeed :D
Seanus 15 | 19,672 6 Oct 2008 / #16That's what we call a crude poem, LOL. No mention of Scotsmen there. We have balls, trust me ;)
OP Lodz_The_Boat 32 | 1,535 6 Oct 2008 / #17JovaBut I am a Pole :D... I wish to make my English better than the Englishmen (I actually feel like their english is poor).Are my poems that bad :( ?But these are not only poems...but they have tunes too....which i play on my guitar....so these are songs aswell.
Jova - | 172 6 Oct 2008 / #19Are my poems that bad :( ?I've never been an expert on poetry. I've never liked poetry, actually...Dunno if your poems are bad, they're just pompous to the limit ;)
Robert A 1 | 102 6 Oct 2008 / #20I wish to make my English better than the Englishmen (I actually feel like their english is poor).Indeed, your observation is accurate. . . sadly.But these are not only poems...but they have tunes too....which i play on my guitar....so these are songs aswell.Rock on Tommy !!!! :)
szarlotka 8 | 2,206 6 Oct 2008 / #21I've never liked poetry, actually...Yet poetry is the window on the soulWithout such verse you cannot be wholeSo before your next cup of coffee is overMake sure you read some Keats dear Jova
Jova - | 172 6 Oct 2008 / #22Make sure you read some Keats dear JovaI have just graduated from so called "filologia angielska", thus, solely for that reason, you can be more than sure I have read loads of Keats, Pope, Gray, Wordsworth et al. However, I've not been converted to a poetry lover... Seems I'm insolently stubborn.
szarlotka 8 | 2,206 6 Oct 2008 / #23Seems I'm insolently stubborn.Fair enough. So I take it my poetry won't win you over then <grin>
Jova - | 172 6 Oct 2008 / #24So I take it my poetry won't win you over thenWell... Who knows? Keep on trying :))
Hueg - | 320 6 Oct 2008 / #25insolently stubbornAnd yet it seems to have filled your writing to the core with ripeness in that sweet kernel of a line. :)
miranda 6 Oct 2008 / #26Not bad M but using game instead of nation means that the second line loses its Foyle like Gulliver without his mini golf. :)who said I am a good poet? I take pictures instead.
Hueg - | 320 6 Oct 2008 / #27not converted to a poetry loverlolWe've all been there yep.'You can stand by the cyder press with your patient looks all you want I still don't like it. <courage summoning pause> It's nonsense.' Folded arms bracing to reap the whirlwind.'Mum and Dad have been Larkin around' he'd say coldly. My old Professor used to like to blame the parents for our lack of love for the classics.It was pointless to argue of course.'I'm not f**ked up' didn't sway him nor did 'It doesn't make any sense.' Piercing cobalt eyes pitied you as his distant voice oozed 'They don't mean to of course but they do. That and X Boxes of course. Extra just for you.'
JustysiaS 13 | 2,238 6 Oct 2008 / #28Ode to Pantoflarzhej pantoflarzejuz ja wam pokazepf to nie rajdla chlopow bez jajtak wiem, nie masz jajdaj zyc ludziom, dajjuz nie mecz i nie klnijna ziemi uklekniji przepros w pokorzejak dziac to sie mozeze gnebisz tak ludziprobujesz sie ludzicze masz tu przewageze zwracasz uwagei ze masz gadanenie ludz sie kochanyjak bedziesz sie rzucac, no to niestetydostaniesz wpierdol od swojej kobiety
Hueg - | 320 6 Oct 2008 / #29who said I am a good poet?Hi M. :) This might help.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Stars_My_Destination
miranda 6 Oct 2008 / #30Hi M. :) This might help.ah, thank you:). Sometimes it is good not to have an access to pop culture when growing up in a rural area of Poland.