The above translation is very good, although: -you should write "w ogóle" separately! -I would also change the last verse to: Z moim sercem w dłoniach twych
Thanks all for the great help. I pasted Gumishu's version into my wife's birthday card and she was really delighted. I have one question though.
Where I originally had "Bez bogactwa słowa miłości" Gumishu chose "Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słów." Could I also use "Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słowa miłości" here?
Then the new version with all of your help might be:
Jestem osobą Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słowa miłości. Często brak mi słów właściwych. Czasem w ogóle brak mi słów.
Ale mam nadzieję, Że moja miłość słów nie potrzebuje. Że spojrzenie albo dotyk Mogą powiedzieć więcej niż tysiąc słów.
A jeśli to za mało Pozwól mi namalować słowami obraz Kolorami miłości Z Tobą po środku Z moim sercem w dłoniach twych.
Where I originally had "Bez bogactwa słowa miłości" Gumishu chose "Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słów." Could I also use "Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słowa miłości" here?
looks like my translation wasn't perfect eventually - i missed this in my translation - I would write 'Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słów miłości' - the version you proposed is not natural Polish (and going for some strange stylistic is not the way to write personal poetry in my oppinion)
Thanks so much for your help. Your version was brilliant, it's just the 'Nieobdarzoną bogactwem słów' was missing the miłości and I was really trying to emphasize 'words of love'.
I really wasn't trying to suggest something stylistic, my Polish is just very weak on grammar ;-) If I had have used my original it would have looked like a dog's dinner. My wife thought that your version must be from a well-known poem that I had sourced on the internet so thanks again.
You guys need a stronger moderator. My relationship ended when I gave this to my girl. Thanks for nothing. You can keep your Polish Forum and shove it where the sun don't shine!!!!!!!
Then you're as dumb as the people who get Chinese tattoos, without being able to read that it actually says "I Am Stupid Gweilo" and not "I Love Chantelle-Jade" :D
Hi am new to the forum and love reading and learning so much.
I have tried to write a poem from English to Polish can any Polish speakers see that it reads properly? In terms of how I want to portray it from english?
Have to say I love the fact that the nature of Polish culture so warmly embraces romance and the idea of romanticism in its culture from art, words, stories, music, people, food what a beautiful culture!
Thanks! :)
A glimpse of emotion Captured in a deliciously mirrored reflection Unveils a warmth uniting two souls in a sea of adventures Blossoming a love deeper than where All senses are lost to the power of control A timeless clock breathes with our youthful souls To conquer endlessly fearless dreams Exploring passion... A taste untraveled before
Emocje uchwycone spojrzenie w odbiciu lustrzanym odbiciem doskonale prezentuje się zjednoczenie dwóch dusz w cieple morze przygody Kwitnienie głębiej, niż z miłości gdzie wszystkie zmysły są utracone na zegar sterujący ponadczasowy oddycha z młodzieńczych dusz na podbój naszych nieustraszonych marzenia bez końca odkrywania pasji ... A smak untraveled przed
I like this one: Rozmowa liryczna - Powiedz mi, jak mnie kochasz.
- Powiem.
- Więc?
- Kocham Cię w słońcu. I przy blasku świec.
Kocham Cię w kapeluszu i w berecie.
W wielkim wietrze na szosie i na koncercie.
W bzach i w brzozach, i w malinach, i w klonach.
I gdy śpisz. I gdy pracujesz skupiona.
I gdy jajko roztłukujesz ładnie -
nawet wtedy, gdy ci łyżka spadnie.
W taksówce. I w samochodzie. Bez wyjątku.
I na końcu ulicy. I na początku.
I gdy włosy grzebieniem rozdzielisz.
W niebezpieczeństwie. I na karuzeli.
W morzu. W górach. W kaloszach. I boso.
Dzisiaj. Wczoraj. I jutro. Dniem i nocą.
I wiosną, kiedy jaskółka przylata.
- A latem jak mnie kochasz?
- Jak treść lata.
- A jesienią, gdy chmurki i humorki?
- Nawet wtedy, gdy gubisz parasolki.
- A gdy zima posrebrzy ramy okien?
- Zimą kocham Cię jak wesoły ogień.
Blisko przy Twoim sercu. Koło niego.
A za oknami śnieg. Wrony na śniegu.
Poetic conversation
- Tell me how much you love me. - I will. - Well then? - I love you in the sunlight. And in the candlelight. I love you wearing a hat and a beret. On a concert, in a sharp wind and on a highway. Love you among lilys and birches, raspberries and maple. And while you are asleep or working more than ample. Even when while breaking an egg you drop your spoon - it is anyway true that I love you. In a taxi, in a car. Beyond all dispute. At the beginning and at the end of a route. And when you are styling your hair with a comb or a slide. In danger. And on a merry-go-round ride. By the sea. In the mountains. In boots. And barefoot. Today. Yesterday. And tomorrow. Days and nights. And in the spring with the first swallow. - And in the summer what your love means? - The same as means the summer. - And in the autumn, cloudy and moody? - It means all to me even when you lose your brolly. - And when the frost silvers the windows? - Then my love is as hot as fire. I am close to your heart. Always nearby. And there is snow behind the windows. And there are crows.
I'm making a special project for my husband (who is from Poland) and need a beautiful love poem by Adam Mickiewicz in original Polish. I've hunted through the internet and can't seem to find any suitable. Anyone have a favourite to recommend (with an English translation to go with it please, I'm still learning!)
